| 2006-08-05 15:11:46 |
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one it's not a true story. that should be obvious and 2 that is my description but it is not me. and three it is basketball not football |
| 2006-08-05 18:31:12 |
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it was great! you notice most people who leave negative comments are guests or logged in as guests? good story. keep writing 10/10. |
| 2006-08-05 20:17:36 |
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That is a fun story! I liked it enough that I didn't want it to end there. More, Please. you get an eight. |
| 2006-08-05 21:13:10 |
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Not bad for a first story. Next story, don't use bold print. It makes it hard to read. Even though it's fiction, you might want to make it a bit more realistic. They're in her classroom, she would be trying to be quiet, not screaming. She also swore a lot for a teacher and should have been a bit older. Just my opinions.
Rain |
| 2006-08-06 01:08:47 |
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Well Don't Type In Bold It Is Very Annoying, And Most People Aren't Allowed To Teach At The Age Of 21. Finally, I Like Vagina |