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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-09 21:14:56 | my night with amanda | I liked the story. i also like toast |
| 2006-08-15 23:58:04 | my night with amanda | Boooooooooooo |
| 2006-08-18 12:52:09 | my night with amanda | Dude thats gross having sex at young age u guys are going to hell u motherfucking cocksuckers who suck cock a lot amanda u should of asked for my number if u wanted some real action bitch!!!!!!! |
| 2006-08-31 08:24:16 | my night with amanda | all those who are flaming the fuck out this story... read the top paragraph "This is a true story, and it is the first story i am writeing. If you don't like young themed stories you should probably leave now." so stop flaming the fucking crap out this story!!! |
| 2006-09-03 22:22:57 | my night with amanda | Your story would be a lot better if you could spell. Much of your problem is transposition of letters in a word. Example: “erectinons” should be erections. If you want to write, you should know how to spell “writing”, not “writeing”. Don’t you have a spell checker? Microsoft word has both a spell checker and a Grammar check. I can only speak for myself, however when your spelling is poor and your grammar is not correct, your readers will lose interest in your work. As for age problems, fourteen-year-old boys would have to go with younger girls. I would just like to know, where were these girls when I was that age? Also don’t forget to place, an “ ‘ “ in words such as don’t, can’t, wouldn’t etc. Keep working and don’t give up. |