| 2006-08-05 16:36:13 |
my night with amanda
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good story. bad grammer |
| 2006-08-05 17:36:33 |
my night with amanda
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kinda weak man brutal grammer an spelling the story musta been fun lol |
| 2006-08-05 20:09:09 |
my night with amanda
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English isn't my mother tongue but even I did notice how bad your grammar was...you aren't an author, sorry....you'd better leave writing stories and try living your fantasies differently |
| 2006-08-06 09:06:05 |
my night with amanda
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Need part 2 dude. |
| 2006-08-06 13:29:22 |
my night with amanda
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Aload of bollocks, that didn't happen the instructors would of heard, o and ur a PERV! |