| 2007-12-20 14:50:28 |
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oo oo make a second to this story :) |
| 2008-01-07 13:19:13 |
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Yo not bad can't wait into part two |
| 2008-01-16 20:25:09 |
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just a few spelling errors and left out words...but other than that i love your writing style...i myself do a lot of writing...not any sexual things but i'm working on... 9/10 |
| 2008-01-24 16:41:11 |
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enjoyed the story |
| 2008-03-10 22:34:33 |
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omg wtf bbq, happy face :) |