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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-06 20:38:49 | Home Alone Part 2 | I liked it , so piss off you old perverted wankers. Keep at your literacy sweetheart amd do it in word first so you can spell check, keep going. |
| 2006-08-07 03:08:58 | Home Alone Part 2 | the flow of the story sucked... |
| 2006-08-07 14:04:02 | Home Alone Part 2 | the flow's better than the first one. but i think you wrote it too fast. might want to slow down and make sure that you're getting every letter in. or just proofread before you post. it was a little too short also. |
| 2006-08-08 03:06:03 | Home Alone Part 2 | dude in the first story this dude has 9 incher what did his cock lose one inch while sleeping wow,,, other then that wayyyy to short i liked it tho |
| 2006-08-08 06:15:05 | Home Alone Part 2 | Barely readable. Is this seriously the sequel to the first part? Part one was about a brutal rape, but this started with her feeling all affectionate and horny about it. It's like one of those stories where there are alternate realities; the first part in this reality would have been a gentle seduction, not a death threat. Pay attention to what you're actually writing. As far as I could tell, they never got out of the shower, but there was no mention of the water during their sex, either. When a guy feel like he's not going to "last long", he can't pound away for ten minutes without slowing down or taking a break. Since when do guys feel their orgasms coming 10 minutes away? For fuck's sake, learn how to spell. Decoding your writing is a chore. Don't capitalize 'cock'. =Dreamer= |