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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-08 06:40:19 | Home Alone Part 2 | Haha i wrote this in 10 minutes and aye dude cmon i aint gunna spell check and shit. What are yus nerds. For fuck sakes its porn. Read it and use yur imagination. true there were a few parts where i could have made it a little better, but meh use your imagination and fill in the blanks Oh and btw she got used to it and like it dreamer. Most raped girls end up loving theperson that raped them. Think about it. |
| 2006-08-08 06:52:49 | Home Alone Part 2 | It looks like you only spent ten minutes writing it. Words can be just as appealing or repulsive as pictures, and we're reading this instead of looking at pictures because we like to use our imaginations. Telling me that your story is fine because I can use my imagination is like showing me a crayon sketch of a naked woman and telling me that it is awesome hot porn because I can use my imagination! You know how there are high quality pictures and really shitty, poorly lit, out of focus, poorly framed shots? This story is like that second category. Where do you get your ideas about rape? Most raped women are so traumatized that they don't want sex with *anyone*, not even husbands or boyfriends, for weeks. It takes time to break someone's mind and make them think they like rape. =Dreamer |
| 2006-08-06 09:18:45 | Mukuneiu: Fog | i loved it...a little confusing with the '~' but great story...please continue |
| 2006-08-06 13:06:46 | Mukuneiu: Fog | The ~ is a simple separation of scenes. Any decent story has them, and it serves as a brilliant way to signify differentiate between sections in a story. |
| 2006-08-06 14:56:07 | Mukuneiu: Fog | I have submitted the third installment, Mukuneiu: Starlight, today so expect that within the next four days. |