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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-08-20 19:59:10 | Mukuneiu: Red Moon | i got confused on who was who and what was what..... |
| 2006-08-06 08:19:11 | Home Alone Part 2 | Work on your spelling, grammer, and edit some. it ruined the flow of the story. 2/10 sorry. |
| 2006-08-06 14:43:55 | Home Alone Part 2 | Learn to spell, grammer is poor. Going to high school and paying attention helps. And knifedge! Spelling my friend. It's GRAMMAR! |
| 2006-08-06 15:09:17 | Home Alone Part 2 | What do you expect a medal DUMBASS? Learn to writh your hand and brain and not with your penis. Oh I forgot you have no brain |
| 2006-08-06 15:15:02 | Home Alone Part 2 | Sex Writer how would you no what grammar is if you spell it wrong yourself. Good story but spelling did affect the flow |