| 2006-08-08 17:02:59 |
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I skipped the sex for the story. It gaves me fuckin chills up and down. Jesus christ, SO good! |
| 2006-08-08 17:40:34 |
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i dont usally post unless something is really good or something is "REALLY REALLY BAD"...lol....gotta say....lovely story ...if it was a novel i wud have bought it...another word ....u are too good with it....write on....!!!!....---JACK |
| 2006-08-08 18:13:39 |
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nooooooooooo i want more of the story damnit : but good story |
| 2006-08-08 18:23:46 |
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Omg, I've got tons of chills. I almost cried at the end. This is THE best series on here. Hands down... |
| 2006-08-08 18:32:17 |
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That was unreal! You are a gifted writer with a fantastic mind for a story and mechanics both. With just a touch of editorial help (basically just someone to proofread and catch the minor errors) you could really go somwhere with this! Fantastic job! |