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Comments from READER
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2006-08-09 01:15:21 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | dude i almost cried when he died at the end but frank got what was coming, a bullet in the head..............you need to publish some of your work |
2006-08-09 01:24:36 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Kind Of Unclimactic, Would Have Been Better If Frank Had Helpers That Took His Side Instead Of Staying With The Rest Of The Family, And There Was A Huge Gunfight At The End. But Overall Decent Story, And My Dick Is Quite Large |
2006-08-09 01:51:23 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Don't quite know what to say besides the fact that you could easily make a living writing novels. Follow what makes you happy, best jobs are your hobbies. Work it out to ur advantage. |
2006-08-09 02:33:09 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | You are an amazing writer.. I found myself skipping through the sex to see what happens next. Great work! I cried when sharon died... That's a terrible way to die. And I laughed when frank got a bullet in the head.. And i cried again when the main charector died as well... Why did he have to die :( Amazing story! I could see the world repopulated in about 1000+ years after this takes place.. wow that actually has me thinking.. what would that be like? wow... WRITE MOOOORE :O |
2006-08-09 02:35:18 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | damn fine chapter. after a while you forget that your reading it on a sex site it is so good. i agree with some of the readers, you should edit the sex down a bit and publish this shit man, killer story. great great story! |