| 2006-08-09 03:25:56 |
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this was probably the best damn story that I will ever read on an adult website ever...here is my only piece of advice for your next story...dont force it, just let it flow, or just let whatever was the inspiration for this story, come back at it's own pace....youre a damn fine writer and will go on to great things |
| 2006-08-09 04:10:09 |
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One of the greatest stories I have ever read and I'm not just talking about sex stories. Great job on the entire End Of The World series. I almost got a bit teary at the end. |
| 2006-08-09 05:08:05 |
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why don't you write a sequel and let us know how all the different groups branch out and repopulate the world. this may be a bit selfish on my part cause i enjoyed you're writing and the story so much that i would like to read more. |
| 2006-08-09 05:44:20 |
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shit this was a great series you should publish it. i would buy it because of how well you wrote it not for the sex. it's an amazing story you have true tlent like some other people that write on here but hell you need to find a publishist and have them read it but take out some of the detailed work of the sex but what a great ending you had me almost crying :'( 10/10 |
| 2006-08-09 06:38:47 |
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xcellent woz a bit shocked about endinn tho :'0 |