| 2007-01-09 13:36:14 |
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this is a true work of art, the whole love making scenes the drama action, it captovated me through all the stories. I dreamt of death once and well you put it the way i felt numbness able to still see but couldnt focus, write more about what happens after that, im sure it would be just as great. |
| 2007-01-10 00:33:18 |
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Great Stories... i feel like it could all possibly happen. 10/10 for all eight in the series! |
| 2007-01-10 01:14:24 |
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It doesn't really matter who the narrator of the epilogue is since it's the end of the story. Because this story is obviously a story and not a book there was no time to get to know all of the sons and daughters so even if you knew the name of the narrator of the epilogue it wouldn't change anything because we don't know much of anything about anyone aside from the first generation and a select few younger people. This is definitely the best series I have read and overall I'd give all chapters combined a 10/10. You should definitely consider writing as a career if that isn't your career already. Not necessarily sex novels, but books of any kind. Very good detail and structure. Excellent character development... I don't think I can say enough good things about this. Well done. 10/10 |
| 2007-01-11 11:56:44 |
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JMiller, i know you have many praises but i must really say this, your story was fantastic! It had me clinging on to know more about what happens next in the next chapter and the details and effort you put into this story is clearly showing in a lot of peoples comments. Fine peice of work which i think should be published into a novel. 10/10 for the whole story |
| 2007-01-11 22:03:49 |
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wy did dan die, he never did nuttin; shudve used chinese water tortre on frank |