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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-06 12:11:12 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | And just when I thought the assholes stopped visiting this site. |
| 2007-01-07 06:51:35 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | whos the narrator of the epilogue |
| 2007-01-07 08:07:05 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Good question. Its gotta be either tom, sam, jimmy or james. He didnt mention sam at the end though which was strange. Just out of curiousity, why did you make the narrator of the epilogue so foggy JMiller? I just dont see the point to that. |
| 2007-01-09 02:43:32 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | A fantastic story and a very sad ending. I really felt I was living this story. There is not just a lot of sex in the story but there is a real sense of love and care in this community.A situation where there is only one male left 'apparently' in the world and a mother and his sisters, in such a situation culture and taboos change. What was also interesting was how the females (youngest to oldest) took the initiative, that was nice! Only one very small criticism which I think tends to happen in situations where repeated sexual experiences are described, there is a slight tendency towards repeatition. All the females say the same thing and respond in the same way.....but hey this is only a small point. I went to sleep with this world firmly imbeded in my mind, I even dreamt about it. |
| 2007-01-09 10:19:40 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Mr Miller I would like to give you the highest praise on this literary work of art. I actually felt like this was a possible scenario and your descriptive sentences painted vivid pictures in my head not only of sex but of family and love as well. The work that you have done in writing this can be called nothing but brilliance and I hope that you continue writing for a long time to come. You are a literary genius and this is quite possibly one of the best works I have ever read. Most writers simply write about sex but you actually put the time into the story to know where you want it to go and you don't divert from that like so many others do. Amazing story and this is one that I am glad to be able to give a 10/10. Please contact me when you releast a new story. |