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2007-01-02 19:25:56 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | awesome story its one of the first ive read on this site that ive read for the story rather thatn the sex. i wish it hadnt ended on chapter 8. maybe you could do a spin off |
2007-01-03 00:59:14 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | You should make an alternate ending. |
2007-01-04 01:46:14 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | Do not make an alternate ending. I hated the ending but I loved it. It makes for a good tragedy after all. You have masterfully closed this book and should start another. I was worried that you would not bring Frank back into the picture. I was worried that you would never find an ending. Great job. Masterful job. It’s got a lot of potential! |
2007-01-04 17:13:30 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | I was very IMPRESSED! Very well written & great story line. The way you spun off different characters - Totally awesome. I'm afraid you've now created a monster. You have to keep telling the story of this family - WE ARE HOOKED. Great Job! 10/10 for all 8 stories |
2007-01-04 17:57:41 | End of the world - Chapter 8 | good story except you had to be politically correct and get a nigger in there, even though you made her light skinned, which doesnt surprise me as real niggers are unattractive, 99% of them anyway. |