| 2006-12-19 19:25:37 |
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This whole series is brilliant, puts some drama into it, not just the sex. |
| 2006-12-20 18:09:25 |
End of the world - Chapter 8
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Holy shit man ... i finally read this entire chapters... and it was just amazing .... sad in the end ... but still amazing .... this should be a movie |
| 2006-12-24 11:38:42 |
End of the world - Chapter 8
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| 2006-12-25 12:00:48 |
End of the world - Chapter 8
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dam u should turn professional wirte dis stuff for a living get the new stories out man |
| 2006-12-25 14:38:46 |
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imho sad endings suck, they ruin the story for me. Great job dude, you rock. One thing in the story that didn't make sense was the fact that 'dad' I can't remember his name simply let Frank go. He knew he was violent, he made a death threat against him, and he pulled a pistol on him. I honestly don't think his character would put his family in danger like that. Even so, great story, keep writing. |