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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-04 17:30:46 | My Sister the Nun ch 4 | you aren't the first and i've known authors to switch names of the two people in a story. i'd seriously suggest you pay more attention to their, there, they're. i'm a reader and it fucks up the story when they are switched. i'm now going to read the rest. bye. I just re-read “My sister ch.4”, and was unable to find any reference to, their, there, they're. Pay attention to details please. Ch.6: From spetre, G'day again, really "world piece"? try "world peace". i'm beginning to believe that some of the non too flattering comments made about your writing may be justified. if you want good reviews then provide some good grammatical writing. and don't slag off at your reviewers. you invited them. you know my name and my "location". |
| 2006-11-04 17:37:09 | My Sister the Nun ch 4 | These are the comments of an old reader who lives in, I believe Australia. He does not seem to like “my sister the nun”, at least chapters 4, 6, 7 and 8. He did not attempt to correct 1,2,3 and 5. I don’t know why. I assume he lives in Australia due to his use of the stupid use of two words together, “G'day”. For all of you who do not understand the word, it means basically, “Good Day.” Ch.4: From spetre, G'day, i, too, was going to make a comment about the switch of names. |
| 2007-02-13 19:11:49 | My Sister the Nun ch 4 | Geese. They're eally after you. Who do they think they are? (I know don't end with a preposition.) From my point of view, we're lucky to have someone who knows plot, character, and texture. |
| 2006-09-22 13:01:03 | My Sister the Nun ch 5 | Now things are starting to make sense, finally. Good story. Needs a 10. |
| 2006-09-22 16:06:27 | My Sister the Nun ch 5 | (continued from ch. 4) as for being insane, well, i'll quote macbeth: "i dare do all that may become a man. who dares more is none." i continue to read with the hope that something surprising and satisfying might come of it. as i expressed in my comment of ch. 8, the story has a certain flair to it. but as for the shot at my intelligence, well, webster's dictionary defines stupid as "a: slow of mind b : given to unintelligent decisions or acts : acting in an unintelligent or careless manner c : lacking intelligence or reason." by that definition, these stories, in their lack of surprises, make for an extremely easy read...so easy, in fact, that i found myself skimming through searching for plot, while not missing a thing. |