| 2006-09-21 13:25:47 |
My Sister the Nun Ch 3
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Old guy: For me I like your story. That guy who said there is no substance is in my way of thinking an Adam Henry. In police terms, it means asshole. Old cop. |
| 2006-09-21 16:03:34 |
My Sister the Nun Ch 3
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hey keep it up my boy frienfd and i can't get enough of your stories make part 4 soon please hurry |
| 2006-09-21 18:06:13 |
My Sister the Nun Ch 3
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To all of you who have ask, both on the web site and in private mail, all of the eight chapters of “My Sister the Nun” have been sent in. I don’t know how they post them, however they do have a lot of stories so be patient. They will probably post one every couple of days. Again let me thank you all for the kind words. OG |
| 2006-09-22 15:24:50 |
My Sister the Nun Ch 3
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i read through the entire story and left a comment at the end, with a few suggestions. once robert went to get his sister, it picked up quite a bit (that was really what i'd been wanting to read, to be honest). i understand the need to set up a story, but i still maintain that the substance really wasn't there until he started finding out about his half-sister. he is obviously an educated guy, and i like that, but is it too much to ask that he not be the only one? as for the misspelling, i don't know how to put accent marks above words, and i've not cared enough to figure it out. if you're going to criticize spelling and grammer, you should start with the story. |
| 2007-02-13 18:49:05 |
My Sister the Nun Ch 3
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10/10 again and again and again. X |