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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-10 20:13:05 | My Sister the Nun Ch 3 | Am I the only one who noticed the panty switch? " she had on a beatiful yellow bra and panties. He grabbed her shiny BLACK panties...all in fun thanks for a good story 10/10 |
| 2006-09-22 16:04:48 | My Sister the Nun ch 4 | (continued from ch 3...it won't let me post anything new on that one too quickly, so i'll go from story to story) my biggest problem with the story when i wrote that comment (before i read the rest of it), is that it is linear, with everything following in the exact order you expect it to. i still have that problem, but at least it did pick up with a bit of a curveball (the long lost sister, even if it is a bit overused in these types of stories). if i'd thought you might actually read my comment, the i would have put more into it. and if i am not subjective, then how am i supposed to judge the story? this is not meant as a forum for the rules of english, but as a place to enjoy an erotic story. still, i do prefer a bit more of an intellectual challenge. |
| 2006-09-25 22:35:25 | My Sister the Nun ch 4 | JESSICA OR JENNIFER? PICK ONE!(i'd go with jess, but thats me) |
| 2006-11-03 22:04:20 | My Sister the Nun ch 4 | G'Day, I, too, was going to make a comment about the switch of names. You aren't the first and I've known authors to switch names of the two people in a story. I'd seriously suggest you pay more attention to their, there, they're. I'm a reader and it fucks up the story when they are switched. I'm now going to read the rest. Bye. |
| 2006-11-04 15:01:15 | My Sister the Nun ch 4 | “fear not old guy, i'll read some more of your stuff and you'll likely hear from me again. Spetre” Although I would not want a nickname like “Spetre” or if spelled correctly, specter. I would give up my name “old guy” as it seems to fit an old fart like you much better, or possibly we could just call you “old fart”. As I am only fifty and you are seventy-one, I doubt that you will be around long enough to continue your on slot of nasty things to say about me. I see that my writing is the only writing which was commented on by you. In any case have a nice … “G’day. |