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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-09-27 10:55:49 | Mixed Metaphors | Good story, just one thing, it's Dom Perignon. Not Pariogne. |
| 2006-09-27 11:15:07 | Mixed Metaphors | I mean it, though. It was a good story. Very descriptive. Structure is good, easy to read. Both grammar and spelling are (aside from the champagne) impeccable. I think I'll go check out some of your other stories. |
| 2006-09-27 12:35:37 | Mixed Metaphors | Again I apologize. My spelling of the Champagne Dom Perignon, was incorrect. Thank you for catching that for me. I believe I will have to drink less of it while writing. Thank all of you for your kind comments. They are always appreciated. For anyone who may be interested, I’m about 4000 words into Mixed Metaphors II. I’m venturing into (Becky’s roommate) Sonya’s life, however all of the characters of the story will be represented. Sonya even surprised me with her sexual proclivities. It is strange as I can spell proclivities, however, perignon causes me some difficulty. OG |
| 2006-09-27 17:38:05 | Mixed Metaphors | I havebeen reading these stories for over a year,this is the first time i felt like commenting,very good and very entertaining |
| 2006-09-28 20:40:13 | Mixed Metaphors | Awesome story I was really entertained!! thank's Cassie |