| 2006-10-17 17:28:28 |
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boring |
| 2006-10-18 03:02:11 |
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To the reader below. I find your one word comment unfair. I gave you, and over 26500 other readers (so far), 7198 words in the first chapter alone and all you can give me is one word, “Boring?” There must be some reason you found it boring. Maybe it was dull, tedious, tiresome, petty, non-sexual … what? Two of you who wrote in apparently didn’t like the story, however twenty-five other people who took the time to write said they loved it, and even those who chose not to write gave it an 8.3 out of 10. Try and expand your horizons. If you plan to comment on another story, at least give them something more to go on. og |
| 2006-10-18 05:39:55 |
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Hey, Old Guy, don't be so sensitive about one-word criticisms. The critics have a right to say "boring," as everybody else has a right to say "fantastic." Your stories are outstanding by and large. I love 'em even if you spell "cheep" the wrong way. All the same, you're tops. Take a bow! I'm the Dick Slapper |
| 2006-10-19 21:33:17 |
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I hate the one word criticisms also. I absolutely loved your story. It is rare to find stories here that have plot and romance instead of the "quick fuck fest" to put it simply. The sex scene was also marvelous and I found myself living his experience unlike many stories where I have to imagine all of the details. It is the best story I have read here and I think you should seriously consider publishing it. |
| 2006-10-20 02:33:55 |
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While I appreciate your comments regarding chapter 1 of the story, I doubt that the “general” reading public would accept it as a mainstream novel. I have been working on a book for several years called 4RULES. I’m hoping to send it in for publication, possibly by next year. I’ll let everyone know if it ever goes to publication. Thank you all again for all of your kind comments. og |