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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-11-02 02:00:12 | Hiking in the Mountains | Loved it. The slow build upbetween son and mother was believable. Not like the usual dummies with mechanical sex organs. Thanks |
| 2006-11-02 15:51:18 | Hiking in the Mountains | it was ok but it kinda sucked dick though. |
| 2006-11-02 20:29:19 | Hiking in the Mountains | i agree long and ran together but still good |
| 2006-11-02 21:27:16 | Hiking in the Mountains | Could have been excellent. Poorest example of sentance structure I have ever seen. Terrible grammar... |
| 2006-11-04 17:47:17 | Hiking in the Mountains | I can see that English is not your native language, but your story is well thought out. You're a good storyteller, if not a skilled writer. If my assumption about your skills is true, making this atempt at writing will further your skill level. If not, remember real writers take as much pride in their writing skill as they do their storytelling. Still, I am going to check and see if you've posted anything else. |