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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2008-03-25 04:03:10 | RUNAWAYS | im laying on my bed nude strokeing my big thick hard throbing 7" foot 8" inchs big are you rubing |
2007-01-14 10:56:49 | Sibling Love_(2) | Started of well and interestingly. You rushed into the last bit like you had a deadline to get it finished. For a sister who had never done it before, she knew a hell of a lot - not believable. Good potential. |
2007-01-14 11:28:27 | Sibling Love_(2) | Yeah, I thought I did rush into it a little too fast. Thanks for the comment |
2007-01-14 19:36:50 | Sibling Love_(2) | As stated above, great start, but the end did come on strong and fast, slow your storylines and keep them detailed and constant. overall good start for y9our first. |
2007-01-15 16:21:07 | Sibling Love_(2) | well i would say it was quite good except for 2 things as stated by other people, end really should be bit more to the point if it is to be on this website i suggest you put on a bit more time in action iself |