| 2007-01-11 16:20:34 |
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I know I've read this story before. You plagerized the shit out of it. Write your own stories dipshit! |
| 2007-01-12 06:25:49 |
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this story sucks balls, dude. going out w/ your brother? and none of the other guys thought anything about it? ..........what? |
| 2007-01-12 19:33:12 |
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Makes no sense!! |
| 2007-01-12 20:37:32 |
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hmmmmmmm.it sucks.maybe when u get to 3rd grade u will have some more experience and write a believeable story,oh yeah and move out of west virginia....going out with ur brother?and telling mom...wtf? |
| 2007-01-13 07:44:59 |
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This story was published under the title Head Cheerleader by Dave. You didn't even change the names moron. The only thing you changed was you kept calling Jimmy her brother instead of her boyfriend. Get a life and write your own stories jackass! |