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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-01-15 15:23:18 | Victor Part I: Falling | that was plain.....SHIT |
| 2007-01-23 16:21:31 | Victor Part I: Falling | lame...not enough description... |
| 2007-01-24 14:06:01 | Victor Part I: Falling | Good first try. It needs a bit more fleshing out and then you'll have it |
| 2007-01-11 13:07:14 | The Big Loss | Going out with your brother? Riiight...realism isn't everything but there's a limit! |
| 2007-01-11 16:07:58 | The Big Loss | completely incoherent |