| 2007-01-23 05:43:08 |
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well done.hope she has painted toes in part 2. |
| 2007-01-24 00:50:57 |
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shouldnt have rushed the ending, kinda ruiined the whole storyline |
| 2007-01-25 12:23:29 |
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great story........lets get part 2 and make sure u end it good.. |
| 2007-01-26 20:07:27 |
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I think your story was perfect. All the spontaeous elements working. Curiosity, reluctance, adventure of the moment. Total acceptance of the moment for the two people and a great give and take from each one in their communication. to be continued means you have all options open . Killer story. |
| 2007-01-27 02:00:17 |
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it was great until right after she asked to see it, the ending paragraphs seemed really rushed and didn't have enough details or length...7/10...do part 2! |