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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-02-01 13:50:09 | Catrina and KIm | Don't post until it is actually finished next time. At the very least, describe it as a fuck scene and not a story. It's not too bad, though it does have some proof reading problems. What it really needs is more at the beginning and end. We want to know "the way they acted sometimes" so we can understand why they're such a hot couple. Right now, all we've really seen of Kim is the back of her head. I'm not saying that it's not awesome to catch your wife being eaten by her hot best friend; I'm saying that this story could be so much more. |
| 2007-02-01 22:39:24 | Catrina and KIm | Wife, best friend and hubby, how hot. Please finish, you got me soooooooooooo hard |
| 2007-02-02 05:22:29 | Catrina and KIm | unseperable? Hey, it's "inseperable." Learn how to spell and study grammar before you think you're good enough to have tens of thousands of people read your stuff. Jeeeeeeezus. |
| 2007-02-02 06:45:54 | Catrina and KIm | so close,yet so far . good start,not the big finale! 8/10 just for sheer conjecture of whats to come.there will be more,right? thanx |
| 2007-02-02 09:46:32 | Catrina and KIm | U, reader, u suck cock it wuz a gr8 story. So he made 1 mistake |