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| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2007-03-02 08:38:17 | Mixed Metaphors XI | i've read this series, and it started off with so much promise...did you buy an encyclopedia or something? what's with all the random facts? |
| 2007-03-02 08:51:10 | Mixed Metaphors XI | 03-02-07 - 08:38 The random facts, as you call them are just a method of showing a little background regarding Tony’s way of thinking and how he became involved in the advertising business. He was also attempting to impress his future father-in-law a little. I believe chapter 12 will be more to your liking, hopefully. I’m afraid I used a little too much pl., or poetic license. For anyone who wants to know, Poetic license is the liberty taken by an artist or a writer in deviating from conventional form or fact to achieve a desired effect. My apologies. OG |
| 2007-03-02 11:36:02 | Mixed Metaphors XI | What on earth are you apologising for? The fact that the stories have substance to them is what makes them so great. If you didn't have any of the facts or things, then the stories wouldn't be half of what they are. It is really refreshing to have stories with a clearly moving plot, and a sense that something is actually going to happen in them that is not related purely to sex. |
| 2007-03-02 12:16:41 | Mixed Metaphors XI | Thank you 03-02-07 - 11:36, I guess I’m trying to please everyone; something, which I know deep down, is impossible. Part of me is still a teacher, and as a teacher one attempts to make sure all of the students are aware of what you are saying. Although I am aware of the sexual nature of the venue, I still have that little voice in the back of my mind telling me that if the story isn’t interesting, it is just a dirty joke. I have seen other writers on this website attempting to make a story with just sex, but I know it doesn’t work. Thanks again. OG |
| 2007-03-02 17:50:19 | Mixed Metaphors XI | I'm certainly glad I found you and your stories. Plot and backgound mean so much to me. I really love the "random facts." Please don't apologise. Mike aka Xmanner |