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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-03-08 04:44:58 | Mixed Metaphors XI | this storie is great it has ... life not sex(or rather just sex) and that is what sex is suposed to be about |
| 2007-03-10 16:40:54 | Mixed Metaphors XI | what the hell is this thing doing on a porn site??? WTF? And by the way, at the start of the story you referred to a "residents," when it should have been residence. being an English major, I have no patience for poor spelling. |
| 2007-03-11 03:33:02 | Mixed Metaphors XI | As an English major, which seems unlikely at this time, are you in elementary school, middle school or high school? I doubt that anyone, reading what you have written, would believe you to be a college student. Also, I believe any English student would be aware that any good sentence may not be started with the word ‘and’. Apparently you were born to the wrong world, as living in this world will require a lot of patience for so many things. If you believe, like so many others that a porn story must consist of nothing but four letter words, you are sadly mistaken. As a favor to yourself and anyone with whom you may contact in your lifetime, I suggest you look around and try and find anything that will live up to your standards of perfection. Good luck with that. Thanks for your comment. |
| 2007-03-11 03:35:05 | Mixed Metaphors XI | I didn’t add any sex, as it was written about young children at a party and it didn’t seem to be necessary. So when you say, ”What the hell is this thing doing on a porn site???” you are more than likely, talking about chapter 11. I think we should talk about you being an English major. Why are you using three question marks when only one is acceptable? Also the letters ‘wtf’, probably relate to you saying ‘what the fuck?’ How do you consider ‘wtf’ good sentence structure? |
| 2007-03-11 03:37:29 | Mixed Metaphors XI | You say that you have no patience for poor spelling. What is a perfectionist like you doing reading porn in the first place? Do you consider yourself a good student? The reason I ask is, either you missed a lot of errors in my eleven chapters of this story, or you are just a poor reader. If you didn’t bother to read anything but the first and last chapters, it might explain why you didn’t read all of the sexual situations that are scattered throughout the other chapters. You may be referring to just chapter 11, as there is no sex at all. |