| 2007-08-08 00:44:24 |
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Very maturely written, fantastic story, i hope to have the pleasure of reading a part 2. |
| 2007-08-08 00:48:24 |
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way to long of a story not to have any sex in it. |
| 2007-08-08 07:00:16 |
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A great start to a wonderful love story. Please continue with it - but make it a true love story and not just a sex fest. |
| 2007-08-08 15:32:51 |
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Excellent story. |
| 2007-08-08 20:16:07 |
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Well done |