| 2007-08-28 17:54:28 |
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This is indeed brilliant. Your story has defeated most others here in that the narrator does not simply seek to fuck her, but to love her. Bravo. 10/10, you deserve it. |
| 2007-09-01 23:10:55 |
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first story i've read on the site. hopefully the others won't be a let down after this one. excellent writing! |
| 2007-09-28 20:33:35 |
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wow...this storie took my breath!
I must say, the way how it was writen was beyond the 3rd gradish type stories I have read on this site.
to find love that is more than sex...but to just be with.
Love it! 10/10 |
| 2007-10-08 09:04:18 |
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LUV IT READ ZILLIONS OF STORIES SO FAR THIS IS THE BEST IN ROMANCE SECTION NICE GRAMMER VERY WELL DONE WOULD LUV TO C A NEW SEQUEL SOON WITH A TALENT LIKE URS |
| 2007-10-25 22:06:45 |
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A sequel is on the way - just being pre-read by a friend at the moment. |