| 2007-08-09 05:15:53 |
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Excellent, a very well written story. Keep up the good work. 10/10 |
| 2007-08-09 08:07:38 |
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awesome infact is actual word for it............ so go on 2 part 2.......... just waitin....... |
| 2007-08-09 23:51:57 |
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very good story one of the best i've read keep writing |
| 2007-08-11 06:07:45 |
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now this is the type of romantic, young erotica i like to read. i feel your fixation with martine is sexy and patient. unlike that perverted lady jane series worming it's unworthy rating up the scale ...this is believable and healthy.
i look forward to the next instalment. well done 9/10. |
| 2007-08-14 01:40:19 |
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Incredible! 10/10 |