| 2007-08-14 03:15:20 |
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Brilliant writing! |
| 2007-08-14 10:01:31 |
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wonderful story. keep up the goo work. please do a second installment soon! but yes please not make this just a first sex thing and make it a true love story. |
| 2007-08-14 18:18:14 |
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see girls we men can be thoughtful and tender .good story 10/10 |
| 2007-08-15 04:40:22 |
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ive read romantic stories be4..but fuk der needs to some real action man..6/10.. |
| 2007-08-16 11:03:10 |
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Very erotic, loved it |