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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-20 11:33:31 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | Thast wasn't bad but here are some tips when you are writing ranchy stuff like that: -always remeber spaing people like o read without losing the line they were up too -Use more erotic wordings or make it really dirty and use trashy words whateva just make sure it all has a common theme -Don't put so much talkin in there -More control from one part they kinda shared it you always need one to take control if it is incestial otherwise nice |
| 2007-04-20 11:37:08 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | 13 is now a lucky number |
| 2007-04-20 11:38:35 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | best one yet. keep up the work man |
| 2007-04-20 18:50:09 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | keep it up |
| 2007-04-21 01:11:31 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | I am looking forward to the next chapter. |