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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-15 19:16:13 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | Ignore reader 04-20- 07- 11:33 totaly in love with hiseelf such a pity |
| 2007-12-29 15:33:47 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | as far as talking too much, i like it. yes it takes away from the steamy part of the story its needed for the plot to keep moving. either way ive never had a problem getting off. stick with the way you write. i like it A LOT. its my goal to read all of your stories and im waiting for the next chapter of horny loving brother all the time. i agree with reader 5/22/07. popping her cherry should have been emphasized on a bit more but i dont agree that her friends should have been there. the thing i like best about father/daughter relationships is the intimacy and i was happy when that wasnt destroyed between sue and steve by her losing her cherry in front of everyone. as for getting knocked up im sure they'll be fucking so much they wont be able to tell which time it was. who knows? |
| 2008-02-28 23:21:26 | The Cherry Popper Chapter 10 | the moron at 04-20-07 11:33hrs doesnt know a great story if it came up and bit him/her in the ass!!! stick to ur current style |
| 2007-04-20 19:37:08 | The Two-Sided Coin ch 1 | ya so og are u like done with the skool daze stuff or not |
| 2007-04-20 19:54:30 | The Two-Sided Coin ch 1 | Yes. The school Daze story ended with Robert and Linda getting together on the ship. I was going to go one more chapter where she becomes pregnant and they get married, but there has been very little interest, so I stopped it there. OG |