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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-05-25 08:03:34 | Ms.Brooks | awesome but could use a spell check |
2007-05-25 16:50:18 | Ms.Brooks | If this really were a true story (which it clearly isn't) I can only say you'd have been much better served actually learning english. Spelling, proper capitlization, punctuation... ya know, all the little things; might have been a better use of your time than imagining boning your teacher. Not that we all haven't, just some of us managed to learn a thing or two anyway. And, by the way, if you're going to write about sex as a "true story" it might be better if you had some clue what it was about or at least talked to someone who did. |
2007-05-25 21:42:54 | Ms.Brooks | to short draw it out a bit more |
2007-05-26 03:21:01 | Ms.Brooks | what kinda faggot name is osbaldo? |
2007-05-26 05:11:44 | Ms.Brooks | good concept,but spelling sucked,made it hard to read. 5/10 thanx |