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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-07 11:12:34 | Late Work | thanks alot for the positive feed back i appreciate it i can work on that with the next chapter |
| 2007-06-24 22:30:06 | Late Work | this was good. I liked it. thank you. |
| 2007-09-02 04:23:39 | Late Work | Hi there - I really liked the concept of your first story, it has potential but this one was much better written. I agree with Strida. Thank you for a more creative and interesting story rather than run-of-the-mill clichés slapped together that everyone else seems to churn out. Definitely, a more explicit/detailed explanation as Haru first regains consciousness and asses his predicament would only serve to add more to the readers' experience. A well thought out fantasy well rendered. |
| 2007-05-26 20:38:09 | The Week I Cheated - part 1 | Two words" shit hot" |
| 2007-05-27 18:50:56 | The Week I Cheated - part 1 | encore!!! encore!!! |