| 2007-06-06 06:25:15 |
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Agood story but could have been longer. Perhaps its the start of an interesting relationship with future encounters. 10/10 |
| 2007-06-09 13:47:21 |
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Thank you for your positive comments and constructive criticism. Greatly appreciated. |
| 2007-06-10 20:07:53 |
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great job, especialy for a first story. Sex on the elevator is a very common fantasy, and you portrayed it exquisitely. I am definitely looking forward to seeing how you progress and improve as an erotic writer. |
| 2007-06-14 23:02:49 |
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Thank you Abel. |
| 2008-03-26 01:46:50 |
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nice fuck, call me for more,,,,4082409820 |