| 2008-01-20 14:52:51 |
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An excellent story! I could feel the LOVE! Keep writing!!! |
| 2008-01-20 22:42:17 |
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i hated it but thats because im a horny bastard and the sex in this is a little too pansy for me but it was BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! |
| 2008-01-21 13:10:05 |
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Well done ! 10/10 |
| 2008-01-22 01:03:58 |
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I liked it but it was a little long...9/10
was this based on a true story?...
yo, and every one else stop getting so fucking pissed off at each other, you are starting to make me angry...Grr! |
| 2008-01-23 09:08:35 |
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total pedophilia...i can understand why people are so angry |