| 2008-01-25 13:51:29 |
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Probably on eof the finest stories I've read on this site 10/10, Please write more!!! |
| 2008-01-26 04:50:28 |
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its got.....I have no idea..but it has it, and thats what makes it a really good storie...to bad this isn't the origanal author who wrote it.
I have read some of your stories, there ok, but not the greatest thing I have ever read...but I'll just say this, if you can find stuff that can blow my mind man, just post the hell out of this site. |
| 2008-01-26 11:34:23 |
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hello, pls take my sincere Apologies for my bad englishabilities...im from germany and just about 18, so i just have knowledge of schoolenglish. I like your story very much because "john" isnt a lustfull sexneeding childreaper. Hes normal and hasnt the intention to make love with those two from the beginning i think |
| 2008-01-26 11:44:49 |
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Wow, incredible story! I spent my entire morning reading this and it was well worth it. I really loved the love between the characters, and the patience, yet lust for sex was incredible. Keep writing bud, you have a future doing this! |
| 2008-01-28 01:03:28 |
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That was the best story I have ever read, and I don't mean JUST on this site or anything like it, I mean EVERYTHING I have ever read. And the way you added the girls thoughts and emotions into the sex, instead of it just being some raunchy fuck-fest.
It is art.
I know you didn't write this but whoever did has a true gift. |