| 2008-03-03 11:12:58 |
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What a bunch of sad sacks! You don't complain about pure trash that's a waste of space to put it here but when something of this caliber comes along, you have nothing good to say about it. This story was superbly written. PERIOD.. I re-write many of those that have merit, to clean them up or to expand on them for my own enjoyment, but this story was 100% as it should have been. It's an example of Genuine Craftsmanship. |
| 2008-03-17 02:20:01 |
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i greatly like your story. Most people would look at the title and consider it a pedophile, but once you read the whole story, you understand it as a good romance love story kind of thing, 9/10 |
| 2008-03-28 06:20:14 |
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an example of 'craftmanship'!!! (wtf !)
yeah, it sunk and stunk like the titanic...
pure pedifile shit! 0/10 |
| 2008-04-02 19:08:25 |
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long, but not half bad |
| 2008-04-18 23:21:25 |
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WOW, ya even tho this is a porn story, it was amazingly written. fuck everyone that hates this story. this is as good as any shit in a library. i loved it! 10/10. a sequal would be amazing! |