| 2008-01-28 13:16:17 |
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That was the best story i have ever read, and i don't mean just on this site or anything like it, i mean everything i have ever read. and the way you added the girls thoughts and emotions into the sex, instead of it just being some raunchy fuck-fest.
it is art.
i know you didn't write this but whoever did has a true gift.
Wow, incredible story! i spent my entire morning reading this and it was well worth it. i really loved the love between the characters, and the patience, yet lust for sex was incredible. keep writing bud, you have a future doing this!
10/10, I agree with all of the other guys; well done. |
| 2008-01-31 05:07:40 |
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This story is ABSOLUTELY incredible. It is so well written and it isnt just based around sex, it has a great loving storyline as well. 10/10 |
| 2008-02-03 08:28:17 |
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at long last quinn, your perversion is heading in the right direction...down. the worthwile popular stories like 'my sister the bitch' are above you, and so richly deserved. indeed 'old man at the urinal'... as gay at it is... deserves better billing than your p e d o p h i l i a!!! hah!
so now whatcha gunna do now quinn/roger cunt crown... your fucked!
you've been weighed, measured and you've been found wanting.
take your perversion, shove it up your retarded, wheelchaired, pedophilic ass and get the fuck out of dodge..... fuck you cunt..!! 0/10 |
| 2008-02-03 09:55:58 |
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DUDE BEFORE ME LET ME GET THIS STRAIGHT. YOUR TRYING TO TRASH THE STORY THAT HELD THE TOP SPOT FOR 6 MONTHS????? DO YOU REALIZE HOW STUPID AND DESPERATE YOU SOUND? QUINNS STORIES ARE BY FAR THE BEST THIS FORUM HAS TO OFFER AND THE RATINGS AND OVERALL COMMENTS WELL ESTABLISH THOSE FACTS. BUT YES QUINN HAS LOST THE TOP SPOT SO FEEL BETTER ABOUT YOURSELF AND TRY TO MOVE ON WITH YOUR LIFE. YOU OBVIOUSLY HAVE ISSUES TO RESOLVE. |
| 2008-02-05 01:33:34 |
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dude awesome book man
ever think of writing as a career |