| 2008-02-05 17:26:01 |
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This is an outstanding story,I could feel the the love taking place,I am pleased that so many have the same thoughts that I have top marks for contents it took me back to my teens on the farm we all played together. The pre teens and the teans. 10/10 |
| 2008-02-07 22:05:47 |
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Excellent story. Writing could easily be a career for you. I would've liked it if the girls were a bit older though.. maybe 16 or 17? |
| 2008-02-11 16:12:21 |
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dude this storie caught my attention and it was really well written |
| 2008-02-14 01:45:24 |
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Reading most stories on sites like this, all you find is sex and lust. I loved this story for the obviously deep love and devotion a male can have for a female. This story showed that age is no limit to an eternal love, and I agree most whole-heartedly. Please send my humble and honest admiration to Jade, for an incredible story. I hope she is inspired to write many more of this calaber. |
| 2008-02-15 22:27:11 |
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Oh my god.us I'm not older than 18, but this is so well written it made me cry and laugh. The characters are just so well developed, you can get inside the story. It is beautiful. |