| 2007-07-01 02:33:49 |
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In my mind, and in the minds of all sane folks, the intent of a porn story is to sound at least a bit believable so that one feels they are partaking of the pleasures. But this story was so far out that it did not even hint at being believable. It was far-fetched and absolutely stomach wrenching. I wanted to regurgitate. I love reading about good sex, but this did not even come close1 My only comment is YUK! |
| 2007-07-01 09:36:22 |
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don't listen to these pricks, pretty good story, and as for the realism factor well stuff like this happens in times of terror |
| 2007-07-01 21:39:54 |
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greate story started off a lil slow but you worked it real well it was hot i do hope you keep wrighting in the future i will be looking for your work 10/10 |
| 2007-07-02 03:50:31 |
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it was long but it was also very good i give it a 10/10 and keep up the good work |
| 2007-07-02 11:26:35 |
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this is te best story that i hav read for a long time. it wa very well written!!!! |