| 2007-07-06 02:58:30 |
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fucking awesome the parts wit the lil girl getting covered in cum and then having it licked off..that was hott.....i dont care if ne thinks im nasty for it because this story is FICTION...and even if u say it was nasty i bet you were getting turned on |
| 2007-07-07 03:20:31 |
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Great Story, it had a good start, as in it didnt just start with immediate sexual action, it had a story line, and yes while it being long it was well worth it in the end, due to all the turns the story took, damn how i'd like to be that brain. |
| 2007-07-07 04:01:55 |
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uh, that is supposed to be brian, not brain, my bad great story though! maybe a sequel where he calls rose or the next day when the manager goes into the back room?? maybe? possibly? |
| 2007-07-07 15:48:17 |
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omg the storywriting skills show up here imminently. Very awesome story make a sequel. Very hot really long story. |
| 2007-07-08 00:36:43 |
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way too much anal... some is alright but i feel as if you over did it |