| 2007-07-08 01:02:16 |
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Long, but then, all the good stories are long |
| 2007-07-08 13:01:25 |
Lockdown
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this was a very good story...i am not saying it was too long, but i did have to break it up into two sessions. keep writing and don't listen to most of these people, they wouldn't know a good story if it fudunked them. 10/10 |
| 2007-07-09 02:01:49 |
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awsome story, write a second chapter |
| 2007-07-09 09:32:56 |
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long, drawn out, boring....very, very boring....back to writing school! |
| 2007-07-09 12:12:35 |
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eh, some parts i didnt like but it was relatively good 8/10 |