| 2007-07-03 16:05:39 |
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way way to long, lost interest |
| 2007-07-03 21:09:32 |
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Not 'too' long, but i couldnt last til the end. ;-) Guess ill just have to pick up where i left off another day..... |
| 2007-07-04 00:31:15 |
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Fucking fantastic; however, it did get a bit tedious towards the middle and i found myself skimming till the end. Besides the great sex, there was a decent story hidden in there, I want to see Brian and Rose's relationship (more sex!!!) grow in sequels(i hope :) |
| 2007-07-04 01:29:54 |
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There's no such thing as a story being 'too' long as long as it's interesting. There was a lot of thought put into this and i respect that. A few more stories like this and you could write a good novel. |
| 2007-07-04 02:21:25 |
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First orgy story ive ever read. Most likely the best |