| 2007-07-14 23:59:11 |
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u should do professional wirting it was perfect 10/10 |
| 2007-07-15 03:24:00 |
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I loved this story. The beginning was just long enough so that you think your going to stop reading but then you finally get to the good part. Awsome detail on the story and characters, 10/10 for sure. |
| 2007-07-15 11:28:18 |
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superbly written. 10/10. You can be a good writer for films. the characters were like in a movies. However, not described in details. the fucking were good. |
| 2007-07-15 15:39:28 |
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This story deserves every 10/10 it gets :]... it was fucking awesome, |
| 2007-07-16 02:12:45 |
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Good story, but the number of characters sort of confused me. x]] |