| 2007-08-27 13:22:44 |
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I loved this story! |
| 2007-08-27 23:11:10 |
Midnight Swim
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a fucking retarded dwarf could right a better story |
| 2007-08-28 13:10:07 |
Midnight Swim
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Couple of inconsistencies in the pronouns, a few spelling errors, and that big OOPS with the girl's name at the end...other than that, pretty fuckin' hot stuff. |
| 2007-08-28 13:17:32 |
Midnight Swim
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lydia? but good story. I liked the flirting. |
| 2007-08-29 18:23:11 |
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Clearly Kyle is homosexual, but at least a sexy biatch... Paris Hillton/Nicole Richie much? Good story though. |