| 2007-08-29 18:34:51 |
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lol looks like someone was thinking of somebody while writing. ;) good 8/10 |
| 2007-08-29 19:12:43 |
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pretty good story, you need to hire an editor to catch your spelling mistakes 9/10 |
| 2007-08-30 02:21:00 |
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that was great please keep going but who was lydia i dont understand i thought it was kate but either way great story |
| 2007-08-30 05:13:16 |
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gr8 story..waitin for part 2 |
| 2007-08-30 17:25:58 |
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Sunbored- I dont have that kind of money, haha. I hate myself for not reading that and catching it. I was thinking about the locked out series. stupid mistake really. |