| 2007-08-31 11:03:33 |
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nice |
| 2007-08-31 22:37:49 |
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the ending did happen a little too fast
i really liked this story i gave it a 10
not only was it really good, but unlike most stories it showed the emotional connection between the two of them and i thought that really helped out with the story
i want to see more of this quality of writing from you in the future :) |
| 2007-08-31 23:42:47 |
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Best story I've read here. I was hard the whole time. More! More! |
| 2007-09-01 04:42:00 |
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that was quite amazing, very powerful emotion to it, alot of these stories on her are the kind of slam bam thank you mam kind of things, no emotion or story behind them. but this story was full of emotional buildup and and well thought out. you do great work. i can only hope to see more of your tales. 10/10 |
| 2007-09-01 20:43:08 |
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x-cellent, great story, well thought out and written, 10/10 |