| 2007-09-26 10:54:43 |
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I think I love you. Very well written, and except for a few very minor mistakes, damn near perfect. 9/10, only because I expect it to only get better. |
| 2007-09-26 20:57:49 |
Diary of a Porn Star
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Are you Kaylani Lei???? |
| 2007-09-27 07:53:49 |
Diary of a Porn Star
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bloody impressive stuff. i love how you've incorporated real-life porn stars into this story. apsolutely breathtaking, keep up the good work. =) |
| 2007-09-27 09:08:35 |
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Not a bad effort. Fairly well written with just minimal errors in grammar, but I truly liked it. Next installment soon, please! 8/10 |
| 2007-09-28 08:52:31 |
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Good job there. an authentic and fascinating story plot. just loved the expressions and stylish plot build-up. ces't magnifique. 9/10 |